Sunday, 19 December 2010
FIRST ROUGH CUT AND AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
As this cut was by no means close to what our final edition will look like, we were aware that a lot was still to be editied and altered. We did however want audience feedback on this opening scene. From the session we found:
- The main thing for the opening was really anchoring this hallucination state of mind. Consider even more strange colour effects.
-Remove plain text titles as they take up needless time.
-Add second scene after "Paul" has woken from vision.