After cutting this edition of the opening now with the second scene we noted down all the changes we intend to make for the next cut. We know:
- We want to fade the soundtrack in on the distribution logo so it's not so abrupt coming in
- Cut the plain text credits out, and put the titles over the opening scene
- Cut down the bedroom scene as we are struggling to fit the 2minute 30 mark.
- Speed up match on action of picking up dressing gown as it looks strange at the moment
- Include a clip of george in awkward silence to prolong it
- Maybe change the editing?
- Re-record voiceover, as this version was simply for the original rough cut.
We discussed these ideas with the audience, and they mostly agreed as well as adding:
- Considering lighting over Grace's (Laura's) shots - This was intentional though, signifies she is in the dark over Paul (George)'s life.
- When Paul wakes up, his hair style is still perfectly done. This created a slight lack of verisimilitude, but as we hadn't picked up on this until this late, reshooting wasn't really a possible option unfortuanately.
And we also recieved our first comment on Youtube...
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